Greetings! (And a poem)
Salvete, omnes (that’s Latin for “hello, everyone” if you weren’t sure) and welcome to Inkling Corner! Thanks so much for being here. I’m Astrya—aspiring writer, avid reader, and violinist. This blog will mainly focus on stories and poems I’ve written, with the occasional book review. I’m so happy you decided to join me!
I’ve already posted three short stories, each set in J.R.R. Tolkien’s wonderful world of Middle-Earth, and I hope you enjoy them. In addition, here’s a short poem for your enjoyment before we bid farewell.
Brother
I see him lying there
Motionless and crimson-stained
The ice is cracked everywhere
Only half my heart remains
I fall to my knees in silence
A scream echoes through the air
Too late I realise it’s mine
Farewell, my brother, I murmur there
I forgive you.
I see him lying there
Arrows piercing his heart
He meets my eyes in a final stare
We’re forever apart
Till we meet again
In a land where sorrow flees
And there is no pain
I fall on my knees
Not his captain nor his king
But his brother who loved him
Farewell, my brother, I softly sing
I’ll keep my promise to you.
I see him lying there
Here at the end of all things
Embers flying through his hair
Dare we have hope? For hope eternal springs
That evil is gone
The thunderous sound of pain
So this is the end of our song
Echoes through my ears again
I glance at my brother through weary eyes
He gave me hope where I had none
The clouds cover the darkened skies
Farewell, my brother, it’s now done
We’ve finally won.
Note: maybe it isn’t specific enough to tell, but either way I wanted to highlight the sibling relationships (though they be not by blood) in the Hobbit and the Lord of the Rings, as they are often taken for granted or (tragically) over-romanticised. The first stanza is Bilbo and Thorin, the second is Aragorn and Boromir, and the last is Frodo and Sam. I hope this little poem inspires sorrow, yes, but also longing, hope, and a bittersweet acknowledgement that there is pain in this life, but in the next we sit eternally in the presence of God.
For Tolkien, friendship was one of the most important relationships in life and I’d like to follow in that tradition. I hope you enjoy this poem. Thanks be to God!
Thanks be to God, indeed. Well, farewell for now, and I’ll see you later!
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Namarië,
Astrya
Love it!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much!
DeleteVery lovely! I love your poem and look forward to more of your writings! <3
ReplyDeleteThank you very much! So glad you enjoyed it :)
DeleteThis is stunning; deeply profound and so touching.
ReplyDeleteThanks :)
DeleteThat’s what I was aiming for!
Salutations! I'm quite new to the blogging world myself and am always on the lookout for kindred-spirit-ish blogs. I'm so glad I've stumbled upon yours! I must admit, to my shame, that I have not read The Lord of the Rings . . . That must be fixed. Very soon. Nonetheless, I was blown away by your poem! It is so very vivid--the emotions almost tangible. I'm so glad you're sharing your talents!
ReplyDeleteGreetings yourself! I’m glad you found my blog, too… it’s always nice to meet people who have similar interests.
DeleteThe Lord of the Rings is most assuredly a must-read and I hope you get to read it soon! Still I’m glad you enjoyed the poem :)